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ADMISSION OF LOVE

Niobia Bryant

BET/Arabesque

1-58314-164-2

August 2000

(5) Nathasha Brooks-Harris

Contemporary Romance (Debut)

PLOT SYNOPSIS: 

REVIEW #1 (Read Review #2): 

Every now and again, there is a buzz about a particular book from readers who post their opinions on online romance novel lists. The last time, that buzz was about Brenda Jackson’s FIRST AND DESIRE--and every word was true. This time, that buzz was about ADMISSION OF LOVE by Niobia Bryant. This reviewer was excited to be assigned that particular book and wondered if the book was really “all that.”

The heroine, Chloe Bolton, is a gorgeous supermodel who has it all: a burgeoning career, plenty of money, great looks and she has visited places that most people only dream about. She is at the top of her field and has every major award to prove it. She has a sprawling New York apartment decorated to perfection, but she has only been there 30 times because her life has been lived out of designer suitcases in every major city across the globe. She grows tired of living such an empty, meaningless life and desires to live more normally with social connections, friends and a real home.

Enter Devon Jamison, a handsome contractor whose very being is shrouded in arrogance. Still reeling over the breakup with his ex-girlfriend, he takes an instant dislike to Chloe. He has seen her type before and is sure that she is nothing more than a beautiful airhead who happens to be filthy rich. He thinks that she is shallow and has nothing more to offer anyone but her good looks.

Their paths cross when Chloe retires and returns to her deceased mother’s home in Holtsville, South Carolina and hires Devon’s company to build a mansion on the land her mother left her. Devon doesn’t think that she’ll stick around long enough to see her house built, much less live in it because she’ll feel that the rural town is too small, too backward and doesn’t have enough action to keep her interested or happy there. He assumes that she’ll return to New York because a woman of her stature is sure to get bored with Holtsville and crave the fast-paced city life. He vows to stay away from her and have as little contact with her--except when it’s absolutely necessary in order to transact business.

They fight like proverbial cats and dogs. They don’t get along and they one up each other at every turn. They exchange bitter, hurtful words and they do everything to hurt one another. But they never count on their hearts betraying them. One day, Devon lets his guard down and he sees Chloe differently and realizes that she isn’t stupid, nor an airhead, nor just a fashion plate. He sees that there is more to her than what everyone sees on the outside. At that point, their relationship changes and the passion between them turns romantic and the rest is the stuff of which great romance novels are made.

ADMISSION OF LOVE is an excellent book.  Bryant is a new author and it is clear from this fine novel that she knows what she’s doing. The book is definitely character-driven because all of her characters are rich and three-dimensional. Chloe and Devon are well-drawn and have great depth as are Deshawn (Devon’s twin), Cyrus ( a nosy elder from the town), and Pookie (a nasty around-the-way girl who has a thing for Deshawn). However, the best of the supporting characters is Nana Lil, Devon’s grandmother.

Chloe becomes attached to the wise old woman who spouts the country witticisms and has delicious plates of Southern cooking always ready because all of her relatives are dead and she needs someone. Chloe’s mother was Lil’s best friend, so the attraction is mutual. Nana Lil is also the source of the greatest emotional investments as well because there are some tear-jerking scenes that will make even the most stoic readers reach for the Kleenex.

The online boards raved about Bryant’s love scenes and they didn’t exaggerate. The new author knows how to put together a love scene that involves the five senses. When Chloe and Devon finally give into the fire that burns between them, it is both magical and earth-shattering. They go from having sex to lovemaking to making love in one scene and it’s all believable. It’s as if Bryant took the act of making love apart and reconstructed it on an emotional and romantic foundation. She used every bit of information she had about Chloe and Devon and incorporated it into those love scenes--and there were plenty. What she did is akin to an orchestra using every available instrument to contribute to the one desired sound.  Because of that, the love scenes were fluid, tight and interesting. He took sex to a brand new height and then some!

Bryant also dealt well with the subject of death. She took a usual grim subject and turned it into one of grace, elegance and dignity. She made dying almost an art and not something to be feared. It was beautiful the way her characters died and did their thing from up above.

The plot was well-executed because everything was there for a reason. Not a word or punctuation mark was out-of-place. The pacing moved quickly and Bryant keeps readers on the edge wondering if Chloe and Devon will ever get past their misunderstandings and arguments and finally admit their love for one another. The setting plays well into the plot because although part of the novel takes place in New York, her vision of  the Big Apple seems different from what is usually written about it. Setting the novel in Holtsville lends a certain something to the novel and it sounds so pretty and peaceful, that readers are apt to look on the map and find it to move there themselves.

In short, everything about ADMISSION OF LOVE is good. It’s a book to be read immediately and then read again. Bryant is Arabesque’s newest shining star. That company has a pure gem in her because she can surely write and should be lauded for her fine efforts the first-time around. It’s very rare that a new author writes such a great book that’s such a keeper. Usually, that happens after they’ve written several books and have had time to practice the craft. Not so with Bryant who got everything right this time. It is this reviewer’s hope that Arabesque Books knows what it has in Niobia Bryant and treats her right. Readers are sure to see her name on a regular basis. Anyone who likes good, straight ahead romance is advised to read ADMISSION OF LOVE. It won’t disappoint, that’s for sure!

nathasha@romanceincolor.net (August 2000)